This is nice. Keep up the good work.
I honestly expected something very terrible but got good? I'm not used to this yet, but keep up the good work
Not many words can express the lovely tones from this song. You deserve top marks.
thanks for the review dude... glad you liked it
A little longer
This is an excellent beat. If it was longer and more developed it would be pure.
Needs more work
Your lyrics wern't bad, but every bar doesn't need to be a question, instead it should be more of a statement such as how Lupe did in "Dumb It Down." Also you need to have a steady flow because it was hard to keep up when the flow of your lyrics don't follow the same pattern. Work on that and it'll improve.
I agree my flow needs work however maybe I made most of the lines a question because that's how I wanted it, If you want to hear lupe fiasco then listen to him, just because I used his beat doesn't mean I'm trying to do the same song. Thanks for the review.
It has a nice mellow beat, as if it's some kind of ice stage on Sonic. As far as a name, call him Rancor
I like that!!!
Not the right genre of music for this topic
Sorry, but it's just no, the rapping was off, the quality is horrible, and the lyrics are just terrible. If you wish to talk about abuse, then rock or metal is your thing. Rap is something that's now for this to discuss.
How'd you get this instrumental from Cool Kids?
I'm in the middle of making a SM file for this song.
What more can I say?
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